Posted September 5, 2013 (edited) "The Flames of Magranon" Chapter_1: Just a Merchant Long, long ago, when powerful dragons still lived on the lands.a time, not your time, nor my time, but the time when the grass grew greener and the world waspeaceful and bliss. There lived a trader in the lands of Mol Rehan. His name was Heldred. As a person Heldred was a very discreet and punctual man standing at 6"2, he was a very wonderful man who loved to be a part of the community in Mol Rehan, providing assistance to anyone who neededit. He was very laid back and not at all concerned about the problems of the world - the only thing that bothered him was the infamous Horde Of The Summoned, Dark riders who entrailed only fire and death in their wake, hailing from the barren wasteland that is Affliction. Though the governing body of Mol Rehan said their soldiers can hold them off on the shores of Elevation a place he would like to avoid very much, with only a few raiders slipping past the home defence was kept busyday-in day-out, fortunately he didn't need to worry about confronting the intruders anyway as they daren't go near Glittershore, his home, For their own sake of living. Heldred was a merchant, his shop was open at the Glittershore market five days a week, selling a range of items from large sets of chain armor to the smallest needles known to the kingdom.Heldred had a talent towards blacksmithing from birth, but he liked to be open towards life, takingevery path in smithing. He prided himself with his work, and he could make a decent living off of his little store located on the outskirts of the new-comer settlement. He always pondered upon what drove a man to kill, he was not a keen fighter from his point of view but he had sufficient skills with a large shield & sword to defend himself if need be.As he closed up his shop for the night he noticed something in the sky - the sun, sol, was beginning togo very dim which was odd as it had not turned night time, and infact it was a very nice day eariler withfew clouds apparent in the horizon around him, as he was wondering this a massive rumbling soundcame from beneath him, then faded, this had not happened before, well atleast for a few hundredyears atleast, the only time he can remember of something like this is in childhood tales, of nightsin shining armory rushing to battle against the dark-army of the Empress of Horde of the Summoned.Could it be? He did not make any judgements yet. Chapter_2: Caedem. Elevation. The previous day. The faint sound of galloping in the distance drawing ever-closer, the heavy sounds of armor as an army preparing for their last stand. The war-cry of the Blacklighters thundered through the steppe. a massive dust-cloud entrailing behind them. The sudden smash of metal-on metal and the screams of dying warriors and war-maidens. The Mol Rehan force did not expect to be so easily broken. Despite their most valiant efforts the mass of the HotS army stormed through a gap in the army of magranon and slaughtered it's soldiers inunimaginably revolting ways. There were little survivors, and after the crushing defeat the leaders of Mol Rehan called a meeting to ponder on what would be the next decisive move in the war to lead themone step closer to the heart of BL-Elevation. Their only problem was the fact that their armies were depleted,and one of them plucked the idea of training citizens from Desertion, and using them for the war.The Chancellor agreed that this was a suitable action, and he sent 10 messengers to the various settlements of the kingdom, in search of men, and women suitable to help them reclaim what was rightfully theirs;Their freedom, whether they wanted to or not. Present day, Desertion. It was morning, the air was cold and Heldred was just opening his shop for the day, news of thedefeat was spread around the local area of Glittershore fairly quickly. The whole island for that matter.And he was hearing rumors of the HotS armies becoming more active than usual, but he was just a blacksmith. And he wanted to go his usual daily buisness. The rest of the day it was quiet, people passingthrough on horses, he sold quite a nice amount of goods today, contented to his days work he began towhistle a tune, and just as he did a very bold man in full plate armor approached him on his noble white-stallionwhich was embezzled with the finest iron barding's he had ever seen, the man looked down and glared at Heldred, The man began to speak about the current events and that he was a messenger sent torecruit any willing volunteers to join the army of Mol Rehan. The man said they were in need of smithswith a talent to their work, and they would be payed a decent salary for a service in return for a fixed amount of time in the army. Heldred wondered about if it was worth the money, he disagreed. And declined the offer.The messenger nodded, turned around and went back the path he came from at a slow speed.He got a good 20 metres away from Heldreds stand, and he did the unexpected - he charged!Heldred leaped towards his hidden Large shield & long sword and managed to barely parrythe incoming maul from the man, he turned to face another aggressor who managed to get a cutto his thigh which made him stumble backwards and fall over, knocking Heldred clean out. Chapter_3: Friends and Fortresses. The blacksmith awoke to the sound of crashing waves and the sound of the ocean, very slowly stumbling up and noticing a sharp pain in his right thigh, which had apparently been bandaged and treated with a healing cover. He had somehow miraculously ended up on a cog,which was quite packed with people from all around Mol Rehan, a man stood just infront of where Heldred was sitting, and noticed he had awoken. This man began to converse with him about how they were taking people against their will to fight for their kingdom, And that the same happened to him. The man, well a dwarf as he was unusually small, said he had the same happen to him.He seemed to be a very avid fighter from what Heldred could see, as he had a massivehuge axe slung over his back. He went by the name of Ragzad, a fighter from the northern desert in MR, and was definately not a new player. Heldred and Ragzad conversed aboutcrafting for a while, and Heldred seemed to learn quite a bit from whatRagzad had input, afterwards Heldred went to sleep again, and his woundwas still very sore. He woke up later, not by choice but by having a bucket of water thrown over his head, oh how we would have liked to hit that man.It was not worth it though as he needed all of his energy to continue with whateverthey had planned for him in this kidnapping. He went up a deck on the cog andthe sun's light seamed down on him, a trickle of blood came from his wound whichinfact had turned green, not a good thing to see from his perspective he settled on getting it looked at in the morning. He went ashore with sweat on his brow, and saw some sort of army camp, which was actually quite aesthetically pleasing, as he entered through the large gatehouse he got directed towards a large-sized tent with some bedsin and he found a trunk with his name on in bold, it read "Heldred, Smith-Fighter 201." Upon opening the trunk he found a piece of paper labelling his daily schedule some weaponsshields and and his inventory of tools, but higher quality than before!It seems as if he was lucky compared to some of the other guys in his tent with scheduelling as they were doing running and alot of physical excercise unlike him, although he did have a fairamount to do aswell. By this time it had just turned midnight and everyone around the forthad gone to sleep, or was getting completely hammered at the tavern that was stupidlyplaced inside the fort aswell... Which lead him to think it was not worth fighting some extremely drunk man overa pint of beer which was not his in the first place, so he decided to go to sleep instead.He clambered into bed taking off his horribly itchy and blistering rag-shoes, closed his eyes and fell asleep very quickly. Chapter 4 shall come shortly, as the support motivated me to write more! [ooc]PLEASE NOTE I WILL EDIT AND ADD THE NEXT CHAPTERS SO PLEASE KEEP AN EYE OUT FOR THEM! I felt like writing a story for some reason and it turned out to become the above.If you think that something should be improved within the story please feel free to suggest! and criticism is encouraged! (i won't bite ) ~Firecat Edited September 9, 2013 by Thrrim 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted September 5, 2013 The suspence! I hope Heldred will be ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted September 5, 2013 Some might spell it "Falame" Good read Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted September 6, 2013 I sent 12 messengers originally drakespirits got 2 of them before they left flamma good story Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted September 9, 2013 *BUMP* Chapter 3 added! "09/09/13 21:09." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Posted September 11, 2013 (edited) wow nice work here, I'm thrilled to read the rest!bart, you are such a kidnapper! LOL.. Edited September 11, 2013 by rosedragon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites