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Typo - fermenting whisky

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Using 'Taste' on a barrel of fermenting whisky reads:

 

[01:37:23] An distilled alcoholic beverage made from fermented rye mash. This has a very low nutrition value. Also it has a very weak strength.

 

This is incorrect for two reasons, firstly, it is not yet distilled or even fermented at this time, and secondly a typo: 'An' does not come before 'distilled'. 

 

 

Recommend should read:

 

Either: (the item in its current state)

 

[01:37:23] An alcoholic beverage made from fermented (/fermenting?) rye mash. This has a very low nutrition value. Also it has a very weak strength.

 

OR (a description of the item when it has completed its fermentation stage)

 

[01:37:23] An undistilled alcoholic beverage made from fermented rye mash. This has a very low nutrition value. Also it has a very weak strength.

 

OR (a general description of the finished product)

 

[01:37:23] A distilled alcoholic beverage made from fermented rye mash. This has a very low nutrition value. Also it has a very weak strength.

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