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Schiann

Grammar issue - hell horse description

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The flavour text given upon examine of a hell horse says "This fiery creature is rumoured to be the mounts of the demons of Sol."  

 

'Creature' is singular, so it should say "the mount of the demons of Sol". 


Alternatively, "These fiery creatures are rumoured to be the mounts of the demons of Sol."

 

Or, better, IMO: "Fiery creatures such as this are rumoured to be mounts for the demons of Sol."

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