I like what I've seen so far. If I can offer a little critique, the dialogue feels a little stiff/awkward at times, but it's by no means unreadable, and I'm quite enjoying the story. Looking forward to future updates. One of my favourite parts was chapter 11 when you describe the ~Space Elves~ and their biology. I'm a bio-nerd, I'd totally read something by you about another planet and its ecosystem.